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一首自己写的英语诗,请帮忙修改一下,谢谢!

2022年11月05日 06:13:165编辑

恩,这个好像有点小错误吧!
tile:rainbow(彩虹)
In a fantastic dream;You are dancing in the sky;
As a angel fall into the world;
Word loses their meaning.
对了,严格讲,英文诗也讲究韵脚的,比如第一句最后一个词是dream,后面的每句结尾也要和它一个韵脚,比如home,some等等这类音为【m】才可以的
不过也可以像这样写写小诗怡情,不用讲求那么多,不过记得写完了自己修改一下小错误吧

英语诗歌的押韵

在传统英文诗歌中,押韵的规则是:相互押韵的两个词的重读音节的元音读音相同,重读音节之后的所有音都相同.比如:hollowing,following就是严格符合押韵规则的两个词.到了浪漫主义时期押韵规则略为放宽,有的时候甚至只要两个词的最后一个音节相同就算押韵,像power,flower,但是这种情况到了二是世界才真正普及起来.二十世纪有些诗人甚至更加自由,甚至最后一个音节的元音不同,只是福音相同也算押韵了,比如last和lost.

英语诗歌 有押韵4,5句吧

【the
star】
twinkle,
twinkle,
little
star!
闪耀,闪耀,小星星!
how
i
wonder
what
you
are,
我想知道你身形,
up
above
the
world
so
high,
高高挂在天空中,
like
a
diamond
in
the
sky.
就像天上的钻石。
when
the
blazing
sun
is
gone,
灿烂太阳已西沉,
when
he
nothing
shines
upon,
它已不再照万物,
then
you
show
your
little
light,
你就显露些微光,
twinkle,
twinkle
all
the
night.
整个晚上眨眼睛。
the
dark
blue
sky
you
keep
留恋漆黑的天空
and
often
thro'
my
curtains
peep,
穿过窗帘向我望,
for
you
never
shut
your
eye
永不闭上你眼睛
till
the
sun
is
in
the
sky.
直到太阳又现形。
tis
your
bright
and
tiny
spark
你这微亮的火星,
lights
the
traveler
in
the
dark;
黑夜照耀着游人,
though
i
know
not
what
you
are
虽我不知你身形,
twinkle,
twinkle,
little
star!
闪耀,闪耀,小星星!
【love
is
thicker
than
forget】
love
is
more
thicker
than
forget
more
thinner
than
recall
more
seldom
than
a
wave
is
wet
more
frequent
than
to
fail
it
is
most
mad
and
moonly
and
less
it
shall
unbe
than
all
the
sea
which
only
is
deeper
than
the
sea
love
is
less
always
than
to
win
less
never
than
alive
less
bigger
than
the
least
begin
less
littler
than
forgive
it
is
most
sane
and
sunly
and
more
it
cannot
die
than
all
the
sky
which
only
is
higher
than
the
sky
爱情比忘却厚
爱情比忘却厚
比回忆薄
比潮湿的波浪少
比失败多
它最痴癫最疯狂
但比起所有
比海洋更深的海洋
它更为长久
爱情总比胜利少见
却比活着多些
不大于无法开始
不小于谅解
他最明朗最清晰
而比起所有
比天空更高的天空
他更为不朽